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Dan Vs: 'The Fairer Sex' Ch.1 -DanxChris-"The Fairer Sex"Chapter One: Cursed"I am telling you Dan, that wasn't a vampire. It was just some Goth kid at the mall." Chris frowned, flexing his fingers around the steering wheel. He fiddled with the rearview mirror and glanced at the man in the passenger's seat. Dan was staring out the window at the inky, cloudless sky with the same irritated expression that he usually wore, brow furrowed, emerald eyes glistening in the pale moonlight."Then why was he carrying an umbrella outside? Hmm?" he asked, turning to glare at the larger man. Chris smiled weakly, about to open his mouth to give a plausible explanation when Dan cut him off. "Obviously to make sure the sun didn't turn him into dust!" he spat, crossing his arms over his slender chest indignantly. The other man shook his head, dismissing the shaggy-haired misanthrope and pulling his car alongside the side of the street, putting it into park."Dan, what part of Goth did you not understand?" Chris questioned, frowning. Da